RESEARCH: Audience Feedback

After I felt my Front Cover, Contents Page and Double Page Spread were nearly finished I got some audience feedback to see if my target audience thought anything else needed or should be added. 

Here is what they said for the Cover Page:

• Use logos of the companies and awards instead of using the same font (Victoria's Secret and Grammy Award).
• Add little details such as photography credits and bar codes.
• Re-word some of the pugs.

Here is what they said for the Contents page:

• More writing is needed on the page.
• Add a subscription box.
• Add photography credits.

Here is what they said for the Double Page Spread:

• The sub-heading is quite hard to read, make it stand out more.
• Photography credits needed.
• Add a small introduction under the mast head to explain where the interview was held.