I added and changed a few things according to the audience feedback that I was given. Where I had used names such as 'Victoria's Secret' and 'Grammy' which are already well know shops and objects I then changed them to their specific logos. I also added a bar code and photography credits so it conforms to magazine codes and conventions. Finally I adjusted some of the writing and wording of some of the pugs so they made more sense.
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